Feature Story for Veterans Day Assembly at Waubonsie Valley High School
Positives: Good job with b-roll nice edit pacing
Improvements: Interviews should be framed better more close ups
Positives: Excellent framing in your shots! Very dynamic wides, and the time-lapse was a nice touch.
Improvements: The background music before the sign off could have been more gradually faded out.
Positives: Shots were very well composed. Good variety of camera techniques.
Improvements: The "Floating hand" in the interviews was distracting. Perhaps change editing technique to quicken the pace of the piece