Silver

Man in the Mirror

Hinsdale Central

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

movie trailer

Judge 1

Positives: Really nice job of clearly portraying a story by only using a few shots and text. Good use of dramatic music for subject matter.

Improvements: Great idea and attempt to edit between footage and text on the beat of the music however it was off by a few frames. Next time try to hit your edit right on the beat for more impact.

Judge 2

Positives: Great opening shot. Very cool tone and use of sepia

Improvements: I'd like a little more information about the story in the trailer, and jump cuts to match the title cards.

Judge 3

Positives: You did a good job setting the tone of the story through sound and light choices. The opening scene was mysterious and introduced the story well.

Improvements: You had a really intriguing opening and I would have liked to see more variety of footage other than students being followed.