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Dress Code PSA

Waubonsie Valley
Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

PSA for school dress code

Judge 1

Positives: great lyrics good way to present the facts

Improvements: singing behind the person rapping VERY distracting mostly medium-wide shots - could have used more variety rapper's voice could have been more in sync with lip-syncing rapper

Judge 2

Positives: Nice text Good message concept for intended audience

Improvements: white balance was off Fix lighting

Judge 3

Positives: liked the modern approach nice use of music

Improvements: to fast with wording