PSA for school dress code
Positives: great lyrics good way to present the facts
Improvements: singing behind the person rapping VERY distracting mostly medium-wide shots - could have used more variety rapper's voice could have been more in sync with lip-syncing rapper
Positives: Nice text Good message concept for intended audience
Improvements: white balance was off Fix lighting
Positives: liked the modern approach nice use of music
Improvements: to fast with wording