Bronze

Romance: The Movie

Batavia

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

The wonderful story of romance and hardships. the cliché tale of a life time that's been told too many times to count.

Judge 1

Positives: Very funny take on cheesy love. Good timing. Nice use of sound bites interlaced with narration.

Improvements: Lighting was non-existent in several shots. For a "romance" could've used some more tightly framed shots.

Judge 2

Positives: I love the tone and the overly saccharine music is perfect.

Improvements: I feel the editing and pacing could better capture the humor. Outdoor night shots are really hard without the proper equipment...but easy to write around.

Judge 3

Positives: There were some really funny scenes, the story was clear and the narrator was very good.

Improvements: The lighting was a little dark at times, and it looked like sometimes the actress wanted to laugh.