Bronze

Brandy Melville Commercial

Waubonsie Valley

Commercial

Entry Description

Commercial for Brandy Melville Clothing

Judge 1

Positives: Look and sound

Improvements: Better product shots. Goes on a little too long.

Judge 2

Positives: Very nice! I really like the Super 8mm look. Nice variety of shots, too.

Improvements: This would work better as a 30 second spot. As much as I like the look of it, it could be much shorter.

Judge 3

Positives: Good variety of shots of the girls having fun at the beach. Well cast, the girls seem well suited for showcasing a line of young women's wear. Nice upbeat piece.

Improvements: Save the walk down the pier for the final shot. Some shots play too long, especially the girl climbing the lifeguard chair. Add a few close-ups of the girls faces as they play.