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Pestilence Movie Trailer

Waubonsie Valley

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

Movie Trailer for "Pestilence"

Judge 1

Positives: There were some really nice sweeping camera shots. The footage of the hallways went well with the principal speaking.

Improvements: Seemed like the mood was a little more somber rather than panicked over such a scary widespread disease. There could have been more visuals of the effects of the disease rather than the news anchor and principal telling us.

Judge 2

Positives: Very good use of environment. Great pacing and a dynamic way to telling the sotry without giving too much away.

Improvements: I think the newscast at the top could be minized without losing too much; maybe intercut it with B-roll to show the problem at large. I'd like to establish the main characters that the movie would follow a bit more.

Judge 3

Positives: Story was clear and the dialogue of the teacher was well written.

Improvements: I think you needed more variety of shots, there was a lot footage of empty hallways would have been nice to see some people and struggle since the whole school was locked in.