Bronze

The Great Perhaps

Waubonsie Valley

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

a scene from a dramatic narrative, "The Great Perhaps"

Judge 1

Positives: good work in camera shots and framing during the library sequence. Plot generated some intrigue with the idea of the coffee invitation

Improvements: Audio and sound mix in the Coffee shop could be improved; Needed more than this excerpt to understand the plot fully.

Judge 2

Positives: Good job of conveying the story line. Good use of different camera angles and editing the scenes into a well paced video.

Improvements: The background noise at the coffee shop was louder at times than the dialogue. There were jump cuts from one scene to the next when he was wheeling the book cart through the stacks. A short dissolve would have helped to smooth this out.

Judge 3

Positives: Very nice video. The lighting was outstanding and the camera shots were very good.

Improvements: Audio at times had extra background noise. Maybe more EQ in the audio.