Music Video for Some Time Alone, Alone
Positives: The use of camera angles, composition and lighting added to the production quality. Great imagination. Extremely creative.
Improvements: Storyline was hard to grasp. Some shots seemed to linger too long.
Positives: Nice video! Excellent use of dissolves and layering! Great edits. Pace. Good use of jump cuts. Nice choice of location. Creative compositions! Good choices. I thought for a second she was going to start singing to me!
Improvements: Could you have brought lighting to this location? Be mindful of exposures and colors. Try and manually expose your images. Auto focus, white and exposure can hurt you.
Positives: Beautifully shot - great cam work and composition. Solid editing
Improvements: Story / narrative? Not sure what it was.