Bronze

Technology is More than a Tool

Deerfield

Cinematography

Entry Description

Peter Kalembasa captures the awe of infinite knowledge and collaborative learning available in the 21st century.

Judge 1

Positives: Strong narrative accompanies the video. Cohesive message. Well-told story.

Improvements: I would like to hear a couple natural-sound-full breaks so it's not one continuous narrative. Also, a couple of the computer shots were a bit on the dark side.

Judge 2

Positives: Good camera shots. Nice use of extreme close up shots.

Improvements: Cut down on repetitive/redundant shots. i.e. you don't need so many close up shots of a keyboard...the shots of the guys talking are a bit long especially without nat sound to enhance the shots

Judge 3

Positives: Nice shooting. Your camera moves were very smooth.

Improvements: Watch your lighting. A couple of shots were a little bit dark. Make sure your audio is clean also.