Bronze

Angel

Wheaton-Warrenville South

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A Dramatic Narrative about love and loss.

Judge 1

Positives: Liked the use of the memory book in the story; Framing with the coffee table was good and transition well to her being gone;

Improvements: Music and narration mix could be better. Overall volume was too much; Storyline somewhat pedestrian - common;

Judge 2

Positives: Good mix of camera angles and close ups. Overall the storyline flowed smoothly.

Improvements: Audio level on a couple of scenes were hotter than the rest. Could use some fill light on the scene where he comes in the front door and when he proposes.

Judge 3

Positives: Really nice job. Good mix of narrative and music. Camera shots were very good.

Improvements: Maybe smooth out the audio levels.