Take 5 commercial
Positives: Pretty clear message and an interesting concept.
Improvements: Hallway video isn't very interesting. Lighting of your main subject could be improved.
Positives: Creative and funny. The song worked very well with the story.
Improvements: Lighting! Some of the video was too dark. The audio of the spoken parts could be cleaner.
Positives: Good concept. You found a great piece of music for this project.
Improvements: Take more time to do your lighting. Make sure your audio all matches. Certain parts were much louder than others.