Silver

Picture Day

Lake Forest

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

You never know who is going to show up to Picture Day

Judge 1

Positives: Very funny...great actor choices and the use of the clapboard prop really added to it

Improvements: Maybe hold less on each one...make them quick, rapid-fire funny and include more

Judge 2

Positives: Good use of props. The music beds worked well.

Improvements: The title graphic was misspelled. Lighting was uneven at times.

Judge 3

Positives: Entertaining video and good use of music. Nice job creating different angles and use of the GoPro.

Improvements: While entertaining, this didn't have much of a plot. I think with some more effort you could have told more of a story. Perhaps also showing them preparing "off camera" for their shoots.