Silver

Sounds of Silence

Lake Forest

Cinematography

Entry Description

A look at the world through Simon's lens

Judge 1

Positives: I loved the restaurant shots and that specific sequence.

Improvements: You picked one of my favorite songs, but I'm not sure how that tied these unrelated sequences together. You need to work on the continuity of the overall photo essay.

Judge 2

Positives: Very nice camera work...shot framing, camera movement, using the environment to enhance the "mood" you are going for. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for including some nice, subtle nat sound pops to enhance the video.

Improvements: Great variety of shots but I would have liked to have seen even more.

Judge 3

Positives: Good lighting. Very nice shots.

Improvements: Watch your horizon one of the shots wasn't totally level.