Gold

Beyond the Score

Lake Forest

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

One friend helps another get back on the wagon

Judge 1

Positives: Great use of camera angles and camera movement; Good job of editing - the story moved well in the beginning, but lost momentum and dragged near the end.

Improvements: Pace of the video could be improved; Sound mix and overall audio could be improved;

Judge 2

Positives: Good camera shots. Liked the dolly shots. Overall good story line.

Improvements: The last scene almost felt like it was just added on as an after thought. I think it was good to use it to tie the story together, but maybe by expanding the scene and re-editing, it might flow more evenly. Need to smooth out some of the audio transitions between scenes.

Judge 3

Positives: Really nice storyline. Nice camera angles. Good lighting with the main characters acting ability. Very good.

Improvements: Smooth out the audio in places.