Bronze

Wu-Long Tea

Maine South

Commercial

Entry Description

How far would you go for the formula?

Judge 1

Positives: sound and acting

Improvements: some shots too dark. product tie-in??

Judge 2

Positives: Fun idea! I like the sound and effects.

Improvements: Editing could be quicker and more exciting, and the lighting could look better.

Judge 3

Positives: Good parody (?) of a crazy Asian commercial. Cute idea.

Improvements: Tighten up the editing, making the chase and fight sequences more exciting. More at stake for the protagonist. Show who he is being chased by, make his adversaries real.