Bronze

The Life of a Lifeguard

Maine South

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

A Lifeguard mokumentary.

Judge 1

Positives: interesting subject/format

Improvements: too off mic even for a mockumentary difficult to hear people

Judge 2

Positives: Sound effects worked well Introduction was fun

Improvements: Needed the use of a microphone Not sure if this was fiction or not

Judge 3

Positives: nice use of interviews good use of transitions

Improvements: need better camera angles