Bronze

Become a Legend

Maine South

Commercial

Entry Description

A commercial for the Jordan clothing brand.

Judge 1

Positives: acting. product shots.

Improvements: Tie-in to "becoming a legend"

Judge 2

Positives: Cool tagline and nice editing.

Improvements: Showing the Jordan logo along with the tagline would have been a good idea.

Judge 3

Positives: The story is nicely told, the idea that this young boy is already dreaming of playing pro ball. Simple story well telegraphed through images and editing.

Improvements: More of a conclusion in both the audio and video. A great shot that really ends the commercial.