1st Place :: Division AA

Where Healing Occurs

Maine East

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

One year after her daughter's death, a high school teacher suffers from depression and hallucinations.

Judge 1

Positives: Good job on camera movement and framing. Editing worked well - the piece told the story in a concise manner.

Improvements: not much can be improved If additional lights were available - it could possible help in the production

Judge 2

Positives: Good story line. Camera shots and editing told the story well. Nice camera angles, especially the underwater shots.

Improvements: Some scenes, especially in the hallways, were a little dark. The audio track seemed a little uneven. Watch the levels to make sure the levels are even.

Judge 3

Positives: Awesome job. Storyline with visuals and music is so powerful. A short film with so much meaning. A real treasure of production. Outstanding work.

Improvements: Nothing to improve on.