Bronze

Runaway

Maine South

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

Without imagination, the mind is truly a dull and lonely place.

Judge 1

Positives: Very nice production quality in this video; Interesting camera angles and framing; Actors did a wonderful job. Sound mix and audio worked well

Improvements: The only thing that could be improved is the plot. Based on the judging criteria, there needs to be a clearer message and a more developed plot. I would consider this video as a very good Art Film.

Judge 2

Positives: Liked the way you changed the chroma from one scene to the next. Good camera angles. liked the way you mixed CU's and wide shots.

Improvements: At times the audio mix was hard to understand the actors. I felt the black transitions were a little long.

Judge 3

Positives: Interesting. Creative but also confusing. Nice story with good camera angles. Great job by the young actress.

Improvements: Maybe use more dramatic lighting at times.