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Welcome to CROYA

Lake Forest

Feature Story

Entry Description

A behind the scenes look at CROYA the place for students to connect in Lake Forest.

Judge 1

Positives: interesting topic some good camera shots

Improvements: weak dance shots, especially lighting

Judge 2

Positives: The well-edited piece used a broad variety of visuals to explain the organization and showcase the opportunities available to CROYA members. The video showed a good mix of fun activities and service to appeal to young people.

Improvements: The service aspect of CROYA could probably use a little fleshing out. Seems like only the sandwich-making was service-oriented but it wasn't exactly clear how or who that was helping. So some more still photos or video or service projects would improve communication about that part of the organization's mission. Maybe some graphics or a scrolling list of some of the projects or organizations helped or information on how the community service projects are chosen would add more dimension.

Judge 3

Positives: Excellent camera work and editing. Great continuity and variety of shots.

Improvements: Additional sound bites and hearing from other students would have been an improvement. Hearing a bit more about specific service projects would have a greater impact.