Silver

The Foundation water station

Lake Forest

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

Helping let the school know about how they can help save the environment one bottle at a time.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice choice of cause and pleasant music.

Improvements: I think this was more of a short news story than a PSA. I also think you needed to explain you cause more clearly in the beginning.

Judge 2

Positives: Wonderful idea!

Improvements: Watch audio levels...should be consistent. Also it seemed like a commercial more than a psa.

Judge 3

Positives: Liked hearing from the teacher.

Improvements: Not sure this is a PSA, more of a news story.