Bronze

The Gymnast

Libertyville

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

The Gymnast asks a girl for a date, but ends up in detention instead.

Judge 1

Positives: nice story idea

Improvements: camera shots a bit too wide, could have used more close up/med reaction shots. Ambient sound changes distracting some scene-setting shots missing.

Judge 2

Positives: Nice camera angles Nice variety of sound effects .

Improvements: Lighting was off Sounds should be mixed clearer

Judge 3

Positives: nice use of lighting different locations

Improvements: needes stronger concept better sound