Bronze

Mantivia

Maine South

Commercial

Entry Description

A commercial spoof of Activia

Judge 1

Positives: idea and music

Improvements: look and some of the copy at the end tag

Judge 2

Positives: Nice camera work and editing.

Improvements: I'm not sure I understand your choice of music, and why the filtered effect on the announcer's voice?

Judge 3

Positives: Cute spoof, good acting. I like the realism of half the spot being a warning. Just like real healthcare ads.

Improvements: Music seems wrong, why did you choose that track? Maybe give some idea of what Mantiva does.