Silver

The Dream

Lake Forest

Music Video

Entry Description

Where do your dreams take you? Will there be someone to help you there?

Judge 1

Positives: Great variety of shots. Audio is good.

Improvements: Not sure if story includes reason for the character being saved. Develop characters. See instructions.

Judge 2

Positives: Good camera work and shot composition.

Improvements: Hard to follow and identify story. Images too similar and repetitive.

Judge 3

Positives: The camera work and color correction is awesome! The snow scenes honestly felt pretty dream-like!

Improvements: Lot's of potential here! It's a shame this video is so short, because your camera work and editing was pretty good! There's a lot to work with here for a more immersive story and cooler visuals. Also, while the camera work was pretty cool, (I really liked the environmental shots and the juxtaposition of the girl against the bright white snow) It was still kind of generic. If you're going for a sort of dreamy theme, really milk it! Crazy colors, weird camera motions,