When you eat Doritos, things go down.
Positives: Parody attempt. Copy
Improvements: VO was too low. better product shot when 'finds' the Doritos.
Positives: Interesting idea. Nice effort to depict different settings and use a variety of shots.
Improvements: Narration and editing could be livened up to make the spot a little more interesting and exciting.
Positives: I like the idea, when you run out of doritos you get attacked by rogue scooter riders.
Improvements: Show the protagonist on a longer, more frustrating, dorito search. Play up the silliness of the concept more.