Student created commercial.
Positives: Clever concept.
Improvements: All video in hallway gets boring after awhile.
Positives: Very funny and creative. Nice job editing.
Improvements: Try to use more than one character. Don't shoot people talking to the camera with a wall right behind them, especially a very boring and plain wall.
Positives: Very funny. Very creative.
Improvements: Do more takes and have more shots that way you can have fast cuts to a bunch of different camera angles. Your shot composition was a little too wide tighten up the camera a bit.