Silver

 

A Missed Matched Pair

New Trier
Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

This is a film about how friendships and perspectives change over time. This film gives insight into a old friendship and how it feels to look back at those memories.

Judge 1

Positives: Good story - I believe it is something every person has experienced; The flashback sequences worked really well; The slow motion in the hall was a nice touch;

Improvements: Better audio in the conversation at the lockers; It wasn't evident at the beginning which girl was the former friend;

Judge 2

Positives: Liked the use of B&W video for the flashback scenes. Good camera shots and editing to tell the story. Good choice of music.

Improvements: A little hard to understand the dialogue at the end when she stands up. A little abrupt when the screen dipped to black a couple of times. Maybe try a slower fade.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice job. Good mix of different camera angles. Good mixture of color and black & white. Music works well for storyline and visuals.

Improvements: Work with lighting to create a little more drama.