Teen Pregnancy Provention PSA
Positives: very good beginning section and last section good camera work
Improvements: I totally understand the intent but combining the open and close with the middle portion (guy pretending to be pregnant) for me, just through the message off point.
Positives: text is working well Good close ups
Improvements: This was not a PSA if it has humor
Positives: liked the concept liked the reverse role scenerio
Improvements: needed more depth in the visual needed to drive point home about the psa