Silver

Candy Crushed

Deerfield

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

In the 21st century, apps can make you happy or crush you. Don't get Candy Crushed!

Judge 1

Positives: Good narrator actor choice....I liked David's interruptions...subtle and funny

Improvements: Some of the edits were jumpy, and though I understand the genre/style, it was a little distracting

Judge 2

Positives: The minimalistic look gave it the right feel. The shot re-framing for the testimonial was effective.

Improvements: The video key towards the end seemed to be off. Framing for the spokesperson was a little tight.

Judge 3

Positives: Your video had a nice professional look to it with the background and graphics. The "pop-in" used for correcting the proper name was well done.

Improvements: It's great to change your camera angles, but simply cutting in and out isn't enough. Try using two cameras, with one being off center but a foot or two and cutting between the two angles. Also, be sure to export your work at a higher resolution to fill the screen.