Bronze

Let's Go For a Ride

Batavia

Music Video

Entry Description

A video about a girl's adventures. Enjoy the textures and movement.

Judge 1

Positives: Good variety of shots. Good movement

Improvements: Use less superimposition shots so as not to confuse the viewer. Audio seemed a little scratchy.

Judge 2

Positives: Interesting images and sequencing. Good use of transitions.

Improvements: Hard to identify storyline and narrative.

Judge 3

Positives: Very artsy and fun to watch! This video even got a little trippy at some points! Very strong editing (on-beat, well paced) and lots of well done post-production with video filters! Lots of potential here for sure!

Improvements: I feel like this music video didn't really find a theme or story until toward the end... Which is a shame, it could of added a bunch more to the overall video! If I have to be picky, (from an editing stand point) I could use a bit wider discrepancy on the post-production textures and effects based on the music. I felt like that was kinda like what you were going for (crazy distortion on the bass drops, more mellow on the verse/chorus) But it still felt like one never ending effect. An audience will get more out of your work if you whet their appetite a bit more, then go ham when you feel its right. I know that's a lot, but like I said, I see tons of potential here!