Bronze

Bag Bros

West Chicago

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Two brothers walk a film crew through the ups and downs of their daily high school experience in this original mockumentary.

Judge 1

Positives: Well acted and good adlibbing

Improvements: Lots of background sound is distracting at times, storyline misses me...too much inside humor? A little jumpy

Judge 2

Positives: The main characters were convincing as "D-bags". The reality TV style of camera/editing worked.

Improvements: Some of the scenes dragged a bit long. The king's party was poorly lit.

Judge 3

Positives: The Bag brothers had good energy. Your slates used well throughout the video.

Improvements: Export your video at a higher resolution greater than the minimum for where it's being shown. It is hard to see the details of your work on such a small export. Take more time in scripting your work. There seemed to be a lot of "free styling" in the the dialog, which muddied up the flow of your video a bit. Don't be afraid to reshoot scenes to get the right one.