A stop-motion animation film in which a girl wakes up from a nap, heads to the fridge, and makes a pizza... with surprisingly satisfying results!
Positives: That was really funny. I love the way she seemed to conjure up a magical pizza from a very small beginning, and somehow conjure a party as well. Great movement, great expressions on peoples faces.
Improvements: There were a couple places where th images seemed a little out of focus and could be reshot. It could also use more consistency in the color balance.
Positives: the stop animation was done well and in an interesting way. Interesting approach to telling a narrative
Improvements: the music didn't really fit the video and seemed out of place. the eating at the end didn't completely tie in to what happened right before.
Positives: Fun idea for the piece
Improvements: I wish there had been more stop motion moving objects and elements...integrated with the actors, (Dancing pizza pieces..? )That would make the piece much stronger