Silver

Uncrustables

Deerfield

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

When the high school cafeteria substitutes name-brand "Uncrustables" for a lesser generic brand, the despair ripples throughout the school.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice network news magazine style...funny subject choice and done so seriously

Improvements: Sounds levels could be a little better, but nice nat sound....add a mic with a station flag on it for the complete news-effect

Judge 2

Positives: There were good camera angles. Nice use of graphics.

Improvements: There were several out of focus shots. The audio was noisy and sounded like it was recorded in a tin can. Could be bad equipment?

Judge 3

Positives: Nice lower thirds. I'm pushing 50 and love a good PB&J. Funny story and good use of voice over.

Improvements: Some audio was muffled / distorted. Also, some shots were out of focus. I think this could have been edited a bit tighter.