This is my stop motion animation.
Positives: Beautifully complex story. I loved the interplay of flat and 3D elements. I feel bad for the poor little lonely ghost. It caused an emotional reaction which is good.
Improvements: I could have used a few more frames to make the animation a little smoother. There are also some inconsistencies and disturbances in the back ground it the very beginning that could use re-shooting.
Positives: a fun video to watch because of all the fabrics used as backgrounds and purposely being very basic. music worked well with action.
Improvements: video was very short. Would like to have see it be a little longer. take advantage of using an even wider variety of fabrics for more scene changes.
Positives: • Fun shots help convey the story of the journey... • Sound design contributes quite well to the story development
Improvements: Perhaps the ghost should evaporate in the end.... to become a true ghost....