On this week's episode of Comfy Cooking with Cherise (an all-original, student-produced demonstration short), you'll learn all you could hope to know about preparing some gorgeously delicious Confetti Pancakes.
Positives: Very clear and concise voice over. Fun accompanying music. Nice preset ingredients, much like a cooking show. Nice final shots.
Improvements: Sound has a lot of background noise. Light color balance and exposure a little inconsistent.
Positives: good job giving specific details for amounts needed. good presentation at the end with how you plated the food
Improvements: have some music changes in the video for variety. careful of shooting overhead shots on reflective surface.
Positives: Nice variety of shots, well developed storyline, consistent narration... beautiful shots of the final product
Improvements: audio track interferes with the narration... Editing is jumpy at times...