Silver

Cassandra's Visions

West Chicago

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

An unstable girl begins to become increasingly detached from reality after a series of life events align frighteningly with her dreams and premonitions in this original student-produced dramatic short.

Judge 1

Positives: You could tell that some thought and time was put into the editing of the project - it worked well; good camera angles and placement.

Improvements: Audio was sometimes erratic and jumped around Storyline was confusing at times

Judge 2

Positives: Good storyline. The editing, especially in the final scenes, really helped the drama of the scenes. Nice touch using "Psycho" for the movie they're watching.

Improvements: Dialogue was hard to understand at times. The music was too loud in parts. There were a few jump cuts that distracted me from the story.

Judge 3

Positives: Very creative and the flow of the video added to the unstable nature. Great job. Storyline, camera work and editing was very good. Nice job.

Improvements: Smooth out the audio.