Silver

Cornfield Massacre

West Chicago

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A routine afternoon amongst friends goes terrifyingly awry in this original drama.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice job of lighting all of the scenes; Editing and camera shots worked well. I must confess I did jump on the first attack in garage.

Improvements: Plot needs more development - why is he killing. Some sound effects didn't seem quite right, while others worked well.

Judge 2

Positives: Camera work was good. mixed up the shots well. Good use of sound effects.

Improvements: The shots when they're running out of the house needed to be darker. Maybe shot a little later in the day. It needed to be edited a little tighter to make it more suspenseful.

Judge 3

Positives: Good job. A creative storyline with good following visuals and effective music.

Improvements: Smooth out audio in places and work more on lighting.