Bronze

My Cousin Devan

West Chicago

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

Two frustrated parents demand that their snotty young daughter spend an evening at home in the company of an unknown relative in this thrilling original drama.

Judge 1

Positives: Good use of camera shots in telling the story and create suspense; Editing worked well - good pace that kept the suspense

Improvements: Audio and sound mix could be improved; Some dramatic lighting could improve the suspense and horror.

Judge 2

Positives: Camera shots worked to build the suspense. Good job on the editing to tell the story.

Improvements: Not sure the reason for the glass to be in focus and the person sitting on the couch to be out of focus in a couple of scenes. The sound of the doorbell should happen when he pushes it and then cut to her getting up.

Judge 3

Positives: Great job. Very entertaining. Music works well with the visuals Good camera work.

Improvements: Maybe work on more dramatic lighting for the horror look.