Bronze

For-Me-Tos Commercial

Glenbrook South

Commercial

Entry Description

A humorous 1 minute commercial for a fictional brand of chips called "For-Me-Tos". The commercial consists of two people chasing after each other to get the bag of chips, and take turns taking the bag from each other. The idea is that For-Me-Tos are so desirable that you would fight over just one bag of chips. The use of humor tries to make the commercial and product memorable to the viewer so they choose For-Me-Tos next time they buy chips. Remember they're not For-You-Tos, they're For-Me-Tos.

Judge 1

Positives: Editing. Tagline

Improvements: Over the top acting. too long.

Judge 2

Positives: Fun idea! I especially like the monkey bars part.

Improvements: Could be edited down. It runs a little too long to keep my attention.

Judge 3

Positives: Like the idea of creating your own brand.,

Improvements: Tighten up the chase sequence, tighter cuts, shorter scenes. Possibly a different music track more suited to a chase sequence.