Silver

Connor and Kevin

Glenbrook South

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

When a friend is in desperate need, how far can you go to help them?

Judge 1

Positives: Good audio mixing - audio levels with music and dialogue worked well; Good use of low camera angles - camera framing worked well;

Improvements: Editing was little erratic - I think there 6 different camera angles during the first conversation on the couch - was distracting; Characters and plot needed more development.

Judge 2

Positives: Good mix of camera shots. Nice tight edits. Good flow to the story line.

Improvements: Watch the "180" rule. If the actor starts walking out of frame to the right and you cut to a wide shot, make sure he is still walking towards frame right.

Judge 3

Positives: Great job. Very good storyline and visuals really backed up the storyline. Nice camera shots.

Improvements: Nothing to improve.