Bronze

The Story Behind The One Day Challenge

Auburn

Documentary

Entry Description

If The Video Say 5:07 it's becasue of youtube, but the video it's self is exactly 5:00

Judge 1

Positives: I liked the close up throughout the film. It was courageous of the filmmaker to have the camera on himself. The lighting worked well. The simple background and lighting worked well with the idea of an up close and personal film.

Improvements: There is no story. The film has too much talk about what the video is going to be about. The music could have been incorporated throughout the film. It came in only at the end.

Judge 2

Positives: I like that you are being yourself and showing that you can do something even when someone says you may not.

Improvements: You said, "I'm going to stop talking about it, may as well do it" and I was waiting for you do "do it." It would probably be better to do your piece up front, and then do a minute of explanation after the fact, but I don't understand what song you wanted to do? Is it the one in the background? Was this a self documentary?

Judge 3

Positives: Good message.

Improvements: Better planning and demonstration of audio and video enhancement.