Silver

A boy with an super imaginary friend, battles the reality of forcefully giving up his imagination.

Positives: Cute premise

Improvements: Story feels drawn out background music (singing) distracts from actors speech Needed more cutaways during father son bedroom scene.

Positives: Pacing was nice Narration was done well

Improvements: Mixing of sound was confusing at first Wasn't sure what genre this was

Positives: nice story line nice editing

Improvements: needs to be in color for better effect poor use of music