A "How To" parody on Preparing for the ACT (Requirements for the video included matches and fish)
Positives: Nice opening zoom shot. Nice use of humor (batteries and cell phone).
Improvements: Color balance is a bit warm. Also some of the close shots are too close, and crop off her head, or a chunk of it.
Positives: good general approach to the video and having fun with the topic. numbering steps helps to break up the video and lets viewer know what is coming next
Improvements: more variety of music of sound levels.
Positives: • Fun and humorous way to survive through the test... • Well detailed instructions • Fun acting
Improvements: Audio could a bit more incorporated instead of just plopping a track on top of the action...