Commercial for Cool Ranch Doritos.
Positives: I like the overall concept and shot sequences were pretty good.
Improvements: The acting was pretty flat and more individual shots in the video sequences would have enhanced the presentation.
Positives: Very funny and creative. Nice variety of camera shots.
Improvements: Don't shoot people right in front of a wall. The audio was kind of rough, lots of backround noise.
Positives: Great concept. Very entertaining.
Improvements: Watch your color balance. Watch your focus. Watch your audio levels.