Bronze

Name Droppers

York

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Two friends are determined to top the others knowledge of bands

Judge 1

Positives: Good use of movement and nice transitions

Improvements: Lighting changes are disruptive...plane of movement changes are distracting

Judge 2

Positives: The open and close credits were effective. The talent was convincing.

Improvements: The camera framing was off a few times. Also, make sure you have the proper white balance and iris settings.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice job capturing the audio on the walking scenes and the use of the of different settings.

Improvements: You need to pay attention to your white balanace and focus in your shots. The outdoor scenes were blue. This cheapens the overall video. Also, watch the exposure of your shots.