Gold

New Bathroom Lockers

York

Commercial

Entry Description

A commercial for the hottest new item on the market: Lockers by the bathroom!

Judge 1

Positives: Good sales pitch with well-executed student involvement.

Improvements: Not crazy about using the green screen as the backdrop for the closing pitch. Better in front of lockers. However, great overall production.

Judge 2

Positives: Very funny and creative. Audio was nice and clean.

Improvements: The person talking to the camera shouldn't break eye contact with the camera.

Judge 3

Positives: Great concept. Very entertaining idea.

Improvements: Edit's could have been a little bit tighter. Take a little bit more time with your lighting.