Gold

Dan Weirtstein Commercial

York

Commercial

Entry Description

Commercial for the hottest new graphic novel on the scene, 'Dan Weirstein and the Clone Machine, Part II'.

Judge 1

Positives: Excellent tongue in cheek approach... good use of graphics.

Improvements: Audio was poor on the video that was shot.

Judge 2

Positives: Nicely done. Good use of video you shot with stock video and still images. Good editing.

Improvements: Use of lighting would improve the look of your video. Find a way to make the audio cleaner. It's a shame you needed to use subtitles for the arrest scene.

Judge 3

Positives: Great job on the graphics. Very entertaining.

Improvements: Watch your lighting and color balance on your camera shots.