Silver

Flappy Bird Girl

Downers Grove North

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

A movie trailer for a film about a girl who uses the game Flappy Bird to fit in.

Judge 1

Positives: Great job editing. Your timing was right on and you were able to clearly convey the story.

Improvements: Nice creativity on your shots but some of your shot compositions were a little off, especially when shooting the instructors. And most of those shots were very similar, perhaps you could've mixed it up. For the teacher who said "Be. Less. Quiet." Maybe you could've cut to progressively tighter shots of him on each word. And not sure if you used a microphone or boom mic but some of the audio sounded a bit hollow.

Judge 2

Positives: The edit choices really elevated the humor. The playful feel of the shots and great music choices nicely compliment the fun story.

Improvements: I'd like to get more information about any conflict in the film and how the game might negatively effect her life or status. I'd explore lighting techniques to give the footage a more uniform feel.

Judge 3

Positives: Very funny story, did a good job showing the message and developing the main character.

Improvements: The sound quality could be a little better.