Silver

Won't Stop Crying

Deerfield

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

In this short thriller, Marnie Kritzman takes us into the mind of mother suffering from incessant pain as her baby "won't stop crying".

Judge 1

Positives: Good sound mix - nicely done Some interesting camera angles and lighting

Improvements: wanted more plot development Technically well done - just needed more information on the story

Judge 2

Positives: Liked the lighting and out of focus shots in the cemetery. It helped to build the mood of the scene. Good mix of camera angles and close ups.

Improvements: The sound mix was a little rough in spots, but nothing major. There was a second of black before the closing title came on.

Judge 3

Positives: Very creative storyline. Great job. Good camera angles and fit well with the music track.

Improvements: Maybe add more dramatic lighting.