Bronze

Hurt

New Trier

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

This was part of a class project under the category of Dramatic Narrative

Judge 1

Positives: Some nice camera work and interesting camera angles. Good choice of music which worked well.

Improvements: The different sizes of image frames detracted from the story and narrative. Using the entire aspect ratio space could improve the project.

Judge 2

Positives: Nice mix of close ups and wide shots, which helped tell the story. The song was a nice choice.

Improvements: Watch your focus. The first screen shot was a little soft. The last(?) walking scene was too dark. Even using the flashlight on a smartphone could have lightened it up a bit.

Judge 3

Positives: Very interesting. I enjoyed the vertical video format because it gave a new feel to the overall video. Music selection was very good for the storyline.

Improvements: Maybe use some creative lighting at times throughout the video.